story episode one

hey guys so the first of my animation is done minus the voice acting. I figured that as soon as the second installment is complete then I will give both this one and the next one dialog.

ok well this was a real challenge for me. I am just an amateur artist who wants to tell a story and I am glad to finally be doing that.
but I struggled a lot with many aspects while doing this. So any tips or constructive advice on what I can do to make it better is extremely welcoming.

Also a big thank you to Stephanie Young who let me use her music. the link at the end of the animation will take you to the original song.

Xullrae is pint size female Drow/ killing machine belongs to my awesome friend
Hazalin the over sized marshmallow/shapeshifter belongs to me.
the bandits belong in jail

p.s. I tried to keep violence at a minimum. let me know if I should put a warning on this cheers kiddies.