This was a funny show, I enjoyed watching it. I thought you did a good job compiling everything together, it's challenging enough when creating frames, but putting them all together can sometimes be even more difficult. There were some minor spelling errors, found on the front page, and in the dialogue itself. The last word of the top line on the front page, should have an "s" added to the end of the word "ask", followed by a group of three periods, this should clarify what it's referring to; in this case the question in bold at the bottom of the page. When Boom-maw advises Blaz-ah “we should go crisen it”, the word in italics is actually spelled Christen. Capitalizing words at the beginning of a sentence isn't always necessary, but since this is print on a newspaper, it would be a good idea to capitalize in order to give it a more professional look.

Frame delay is an important part of animating, there were a few dialogue bubbles that had either too much delay or not enough. When Blaz-ah makes her first opening statement, there is a little too much time delay, when there is too much stillness in any kind of animation like this, it can weaken the attention of the viewer, and threaten the quality of the piece. When Boom-maw makes her reply about the opening of a new art gallery, “a new art gallery eh!” there should be a question mark instead of an exclamation point, or you could put a question mark before it. When using written dialogue, correctly applied punctuation marks can make a big difference in the way the dialogue is displayed. When Blaz-ah tells Boom-maw “Okay” “you can bring one”, there is very little delay. Though there is not a lot of delay needed here, any lack of delay can make the frames appear to run into each other. When using freehand dialogue bubbles, it is best to use freehand writing as well, when you have print that is not freehand and a bubble that is, it can look less attractive since the two come from two opposite designs. I recommend using ellipses templates or making them from a tool that can create ellipses.

When the male character at the art gallery grabs the newspaper, the print below the picture that reads “sleazers at large”, part of the letter l in the word sleazers runs into the picture. The natural disorder or a wrinkled up newspaper compromises the crookedness of the lettering, but letters themselves shouldn’t run into the images. After the male character grabs his cell phone to dial 911, there is little haste, when dialing a number such as this one; one would naturally be dialing the number quite frantically.