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Heya kiddies. Ok first of all I will let you know that there isn't any action in this installment just a lot of talking :P
I like to develop the story a bit before it gets to the fun part.
there will be some action in the next installment and alot of action in the one after that :)

Hazelin is acting abit like a school girl here but he knows all too well that Drow can be dangerous. He wants to know where he stands with the mysterious Xullrae.

Once again I would love to thank all the people who contributed to this project many hugs to you :hug:

music by :iconjessismith:
voice actors as appear Xullrae: :iconmysticchild:
Hazalin: :iconshadowring123:
and
:iconeyesadrift: who's voice you will here in the later chapters.

If you are ever in need of a voice actor/actress then these are the peoples to go to.


Also in future I am gonna make my installments smaller.

I am sorry about the big file size.

I tried to match the voice up as best as I could. I am confident that it will be alot smother in my next installment.


I still don't think I got the sound quite right. Any tips of doing good audio in flash is very much appreciated. Plus I thank all those who have given me tips and advice in the past.
I will get it right one day :D



The pint size killing machine drowess Xullrae belongs to my friend :iconxullraezauviir:
Hazalin the shapeshifter belong to meesa


episodes

part one [link]
part two [link]
part three [link]
part four [link]
part five [link]
part six [link]
part seven [link]
part eight [link]
part nine [link]
part ten [link]
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:iconberevenged:
I think you have the basics down, but everything could be a bit more polished.
Sometimes there are almost no frames between the start of a movement and the end.
The voice acting is okay but you might want to adjust it with some programs here and there, so that it sounds more like a real conversation and not like someone reading the lines of a piece of paper.
The characters are original and they have very distinctive differences. Its a good thing that you made the difference in length noticeable.

Overall I think you are well on your way and I think that by making a few more of these movies you will automatically improve.

P.S. Xullrae is awshum :3
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slategreen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I can't believe I missed this one. The lines are great and the animation is delightful! I love the characters--Hazalin's almost innocent personality and Xullrae's sexy, badass one. :)
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littlegoblet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
lol oh snap.  it is funny when I look back at the older animations and cringe.   Actually even the newer ones give me something to cringe about, but I am glad you like it buddy.   Lol the owner of Xullrae says that Xullrae doesn't hide the fact that she is bad. 
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graffilthy Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
Great characters. This is really good. 
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Fluffly-chan Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good animation! I like your works!
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
thanx buddy. I hope to get better as time goes on :)
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:iconfluffly-chan:
Fluffly-chan Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You gonna improve so much, I'm believe in you (:
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
thanxies buddy you are soo sweet :hug:
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:iconfluffly-chan:
Fluffly-chan Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You welcome :iconcheerplz:
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MeMyMine Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
By the way, superb voices!
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
thanxies buddy. I am very happy I found them cause they have lots of talent :XD:
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:iconleilansdream:
LeilansDream Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
I love the voice for Xull'rae! Really awesome! Looking forward for next episode! :la:
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
thanx buddy. hope to have the next part finished soon but it is a very small episode. I am gonna make them smaller from now on so my computer can handle it better lol
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:iconmysticchild:
MysticChild Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Filmographer
Thank you.......... C=
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Arctic-fox127 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love you voice, too! -feels left out- @_@
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:iconmysticchild:
MysticChild Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Student Filmographer
Aw thank you thank you!! ^_^
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:iconmysticchild:
MysticChild Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
I didn't know it was finished!!! This is wonderful! =) You did such a fantastic job! =)) I'll be posting links to this on my youtube page!
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
oh Heya buddy I was gonna tell you once I posted it to Newgrounds lol but I hadn't done that yet because I have been abit busy. But I am hoping to get it posted there by Tuesday. Sorry for making you wait buddy. Next time it will be instantly :XD: Oh and I am thrilled that you like it :boogie: People enjoyed listening to you too :)
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:iconmysticchild:
MysticChild Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
Oh awesome! I'll watch it there too! =) Aw I'm glad!! ^_^
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow: Fantastic! :love:
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
thanxies Damie :)
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GeoHammer Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
Very cool work! Can't wait for the next part. :)
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
thanx again for taking looksies buddy :XD:
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PoldalleLovesnare Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
d'awwww he doesn't wanna wear heels?!

:paranoid:....smart boy lol ;P

and hey nothing wrong with a bunch of talking when it's fun story-telling and character interaction! ;P
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
thanxies buddy. I always liked that kind of interaction too but when I watched this again just to make sure I had smoothed out all the kinks I thought. Woah, there is alot of talking in that lol. Hee hee.
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PoldalleLovesnare Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it was entertaining to me! especially with the voices ^^
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
thanx buddy Im glad you enjoyed my voice actors.
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:iconpoldallelovesnare:
PoldalleLovesnare Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you've got good ones ^^
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
me think so too :XD: so thanxies again :D
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KakashiMorph Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Heheh and off to the dungeon they go!
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
lol thanxies for the comment buddy :hug: :P
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XullraeZauviir Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:fan girl scream: So epic, so awesome, cool, impressive, stunning, beautiful, breathtaking, and magnificent! :worship:

I lay at your feet and worship you! :happycry:

So much talent, all of you. :heart:
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
lol Lisa you are too kind but I'm thrilled that you are enjoying it. :hug: I think it helps a great deal too when you got fun characters to play with :XD:
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KiraYokime Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LEONIDAS STYLE: THIS IS AWESOME!!!!
The sound is better than in the prev. versions! Goddamit, voice actors, animation, EVERYTHING.
Sorry for overemotional reaction, but this is really a BIG THING from you)
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
lol thats ok buddy It means alot to get such encouraging comments. I hope I can improve with every one I do. yeah it has to be the biggest thing I have ever done. thanxies buddy :hug:
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KiraYokime Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't stop the music, buddy) I wish to know what's gonna happen in next ep.
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littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
more talking lol but the one after that. . .some action yeaaaaah
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KiraYokime Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ACTION IS GOOD. NOT SO GORGEOUS AS CATS, BUT GOOD.
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
:giggle:
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A-Moth Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uuuuh I just love this episode :D When Hazalin opens his eyes the only thing missing is 'No dad, I'm a princess. I want something more' XD Brilliant ;p really, really like it
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littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
hee hee yeah. thanxies for taking another looksies buddy. always appreciate it.
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A-Moth Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NO problem :D I really enjoy your work
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Jessismith Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oooh! Brilliant stuff, buddy! I think that this one is the best I have seen from you so far! I always say that, because you're always getting better at what you do. :D Also, the dialogue was very well-written, and the voices were great as always. The animation was right on as well. most excellent altogether. And I'm totally psyched for more. :D
PS: Thanks for using my music once more. Means a lot. :hug:
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
ahh thanx for your lovely comment buddy :hug: It means so much to me. I am so glad you can see improvements. I think I am finding easier way to do some things too. Did the sound sound clearer to you this time? And it is an honour using your awesome music too. :hug:
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:iconjessismith:
Jessismith Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem budyd. :hug: Indeed. It did sound clearer. Definitely a much better quality. I'm also glad that you are finding easier ways to make a better looking animation. :)
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McDonaldsFarmer Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Professional Writer
this sexually gratifies me. great work
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:iconlittlegoblet:
littlegoblet Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
whhhhhaaaaaa lol :P um. . . . I don't know how to reply to that 0_0
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