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Dancing in the clouds

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and here is the two characters together.
Tho who belongs to :iconpoldallelovesnare: and
Rhylan who belongs to :iconmadprincefeanor:

Unfortunatly my computer can't handle very big files so I had to draw them both individualy. So if they seem abit off that might be why.

I imagine that Tho took Rhylan to one of his most favourite high place's to watch him dance. Lets hope Rhylan doesn't accidently fall off the edge lol.

:iconpoldallelovesnare: was the winner of my digital harpy contest.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Lack of a consistent light source. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/h/t…" alt=":icontheresyourproblemplz:" title="theresyourproblemplz"/>
Most obvious example is the blond guy. His face is has distinct light coming from the left, the body has the light mostly coming from the right.

Something else that bugs me a little is that the faces are pretty realistic but the further away you get the flatter colours and the less variation in shadows and highlights. The clothes of the person in the foreground are detailed enough, but the colours of the shirt, for example, are flat enough to make it seem like the shirt is just hanging in the air, not resting on his body (since there's no creases, shadows, you know, a sense of it actually being on someone). Textures are your friends.

You win for good anatomy, great details, and good colours.
The background needs a bit of work, I mean, either those are fireflies or stars in *front* of the clouds? and the moon (?) kinda hangs in a mysterious space since the light suggest it's in the foreground and general moon knowledge suggest it's far away in the sky.

But the entirety of the clouds and pillars and the reflection (which is really nice) sets a good mood and frame for your two characters. And I love the wings. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="18" height="15" alt=":eager:" title=":eager: by darkmoon3636" />

Basically, just work out where your light is coming from, what time of day it is, and work a bit more on your textures.
But a really good job.